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Sunfall by Eyenoom

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This is beautiful! I love the warm feel to it, and it isn't hard to sense the close bond between the mentor and apprentice. You also did well on the background, all of which adds to the scene really well. The only thing I might've done differently or added would be a bit of ruffling on the two cats' fur, because the way the grasses were drawn gives a nice wind/breeze effect. I also might have added a bit of wave into the sea horizon to get a little less of the perfect line effect. Just a few tiny things that were just my personal opinion. Neither of which lacking takes away from this!

Overall, a very warm and sweet piece. Good job!
- Bella
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Eyenoom Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much for the critique, and for the nice words C:
And I can only say, that you're right in what you've said :XD: Even though it was actually not supposed to look like there was alot of wind. The grass looks like it does there, is because it's often pretty spike, when it's right on an edge XD
And maybe you're right about the waves too, even though I've gained the experience, that you can't really see the waves, when they're so far away :XD:

But I thank you alot C:

//Eyenoom
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